Saturday, October 15, 2016

My Letter to the Editor of "Twtr? It's Majorly Bad!"


To the editor of 'Twtr? Its Majorly Bad!:

          After reading the ideas expressed in this article against the influence of text type in the English language, I decided to write a letter expressing my opinion towards the article.

           I believe that the article has a bias perspective and negative attitude towards the use of Text type and the form of slang used by the younger generations with descriptions like text type "Erodes pupil's language skills". Although 81% of teenagers use the internet, more adults use the internet with an increasing amount of 87% in 2016. This means that adults are the victims whom are most likely going to have, in the authors opinion an "affect" on their language skills since their are more of them using the internet rather than teenagers.

          The article continues to argue that youngsters are "in danger of growing up with limited vocabularies" because of how much time they spend on social media sites however, 96% of students with internet access report using social networking technologies use these tools to discuss educational topics. As a student, the internet is one of the most important key to success as it plays a vital role in delivering and accessing a variety of reliable educational sources. This means that not all of us waste our time on the internet but rather educate our selves and take the advantage of accessing online educational sources. Compared to previous generations, I believe that the internet does not limit our vocabulary but rather expands our knowledge of a language that is evolving in a whole new way of writing. Having a balancing act between the "formal" way of English and  the "slang" text type way is in my opinion a linguistic miracle as recent studies proved that being "Bi-dialect" allows the individual to learn new words easily and are better listeners compared to a monolinguial.

           Furthermore the article mentions how teachers realise the students who tend to use text type like "ur" and "gr8" are often the ones who achieve the lowest SAT marks but in my opinion, the emergent complexity of a language gradually evolves a whole new way of writing. This allows students to embrace the difference between speech and writing therefore expanding their linguistic structure and way of dialect. 

           I understand that Text type and the use of slang has a lack of concern with rules but, this does not mean that a solution is teaching English the "traditional way" in order to maintain the proper English. So now the evolvement of a language is a crime? With all honesty, different dialects of English expands ones knowledge on the language. As the Irish play-write George Bernard Shaw once said: "Progress is impossible without change" therefore the the English language will not progress unless changes occur like the evolvement of Text type.

          Clearly the article shows a thorough understanding of the negative impact of text type on the “formal” English language with varied and reliable sources to back up arguments given. However I highly recommend that you offer insights of the positive impacts that text types has on the language because the article is too bias therefore, I truly urge that you deeply look into the topic. By doing so, you will be able to write in a receptive manner as you would accept other ideas easily and would not be one-sided.


Best Regards,


Hala Ariqat














3 comments:

  1. Hey Hala, I found your editor to the letter interesting as I did mine on the same text and we have agreed with many points. You do a wonderful job at tearing the article apart while keeping your letter quite structured which mine may have lacked. Also, many of your points have been backed up very well while keeping a very open mind. The only thing I would say is to maybe next time make the letter a little bit more personal or present some emotion. I wouldn't say begin yelling at the author but to add some more emotion would make your character a little bit more believable as of right now, it seems like a well planned out speech. I may be wrong on this as I'm still learning this text type but I think it could add a realness to it. Overall, you did an amazing job!

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  2. Hi Hala, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your letter to the editor as it discussed a variety of arguments. I agree with Karma's comment, regarding your structure of the letter. The structure is coherent and efficient, which provides a flow throughout the text. Your arguments included relevant factual information, as well as quotes used from the text itself. I especially agree with your statement "As a student, the internet is one of the most important key to success as it plays a vital role in delivering and accessing a variety of reliable educational sources", because over the years I've noticed how technology has affected the way we learn. One thing to maybe keep in mind is making your letter more concise, as it's quite long for a letter to the editor. Overall, however, you did an excellent job! Keep up the good work!

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  3. I enjoyed reading your thorough letter about the article. I also agree with all your points. My blog was also about the same article and I very much agree with your opinion. The blog is also very well structured. Text speak is actually a evolving our English language. I also like the fact that you are referencing back to the article. Good job!

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